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Still Not Awake

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Added tea leaves into my coffee.
#SixWordStories Word prompt - tea

Made me think of Englishman. And that i can't stay awake any longer. I've been delaying my sleeping hours to only wake up too early sometimes. You'd start to think i was related to a panda or put on too much eyeshadow on my lower eyelid.
But really, a hug or maybe someone to tell me i'm going to be okay would be lovely. There's just too much shit going on to fall asleep.
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3wyl's avatar
It doesn't make as much sense without the title.. or rather, the title clears things up a bit. I think the concept is fantastic, though. This is a piece that makes you read it twice after reading it and then waiting a few seconds for it to sink in before going, "Wait, what...?"

That reflects the subject matter well, I feel...

Not bad! :nod: